My thought's on the up-coming term

Talofa this will be about my thoughts about this term.This term is term four. I hope you enjoy my writing.

The term is all about Toy Story. Which actually means about toys. Through this term I hope we will discover all of the old toys that we haven't seen in our lives.What I hope the most is that we can make different toys through different objects that we hardly use like rubbish!!!The meaning of the theme is WHAT IS THE STORY BEHIND THE TOY.

My thought’s about this term is that I’m glad it’s about toys. I’m glad it’s about toy’s because it’s much easier to think about and you think quickly what to say in your writing. In my head the thought I’m thinking is this going to be a challenge through my writing?   

Now ladies and gentlemen boys and girls I thank my friend Jasmine for reading my writing and editing it. I also want you to stay tune and have a look at my writing over the terms. Ka kite ano!

My Revamp in my writing!

My family member that has been inspiring me is my brother!He is the only cheerleader I got in my family.

I choose him as my inspiration because he is my role model and my cheerleader.Through the past years I’ve been working hard to be a true rippa rugby star. As I have been training my brother would be cheering me on to be a better player.

What I want in the future for my brother is that I hope he becomes a rugby coach star. But on his side of the story he wants to be police officer and I’ll accept it. But in the future I hope I don’t get arrested by him!

So a big thank you to my friend Jasmine for editing my writing.So stay put because I will be posting about different things that you must be interested in.Tofa soifua!!!

Who's My Inspiration in my life?

The person that inspiration me in my life is my older brother! He is the only friend I got in my family.

I choose him as my inspiration because he is my role model and my cheerleader. He is the one that I love and the one that I treat respectfully. Through the past years I’ve been working hard to be a true rippa rugby star. As I have been training my brother has been watching and has been cheering for me.

What I like about my brother as my inspiration is that I hope he becomes a rugby sort of sports coach. But on his side of it he wants to be police officer and I’ll accept it. But in the future I hope I don’t get arrested by him!

What I think my future is going to turn out is that I hope I’ll be a famous rippa rugby player. So a big thank you to my friend Jasmine for editing and for making it better.

My Improvement in my writing!

Hello! This is all about my book called EJ12. You might of heard of this book. Well this is my thought’s about the book.

I selected this book because
I haven't and I mean haven’t read  one of these series in my whole life. So we’re going to see what was my interested in this author's


What I have seen in this author’s book. Is that I love how she uses her vocabulary like an easy word to a complex interesting word. You might be confused how I explained it but this is what I mean... is that she put the word in a easy meaning into a difficult meaning.Like interest and enthusiastic.

I should really give a big thank you to Jasmine who is also my friend as she has helped me with my writing. So stay tune because there is more to post from me tofa soifua.

My Duffy Book

 Talofa Lava! This is all about my book called EJ12. You might of heard or already read it. Well this is my thought’s about the book.

I choose this book because I love reading and it’s also because reading is my favourite thing to do through my education. Also because I really want to know more of this authors books and see what’s my interest in her writing.

I see in this author is that I love her vocabulary and how she get's easy words that she had transform into an interesting word. Susannah Mcfarlane is a interesting author, but for my opinion and scores on her books is ten and excellent!

I thank my very best friend Jasmine for helping me through my writing by making it make sense.So stay tune and keep in touch because there is another book that I’m going to write about and this one is interesting too and I hope you will enjoy my writing ka kete ano.

My Improvement in my writing!

Kia ora mate I will be telling you all about my hobbies. The first thing we should do is buckle your seat belts because this is writing is going to blow you out of your seats.

What are hobbies? Hobbies are things that you enjoy in your life. Like mine. Mine are Swimming and sports, the main things I enjoy in my life! I chose swimming and sports because my favourite challenge is running. Running? you might be thinking, well swimming does involve running following by sport!

What I love about my hobbies are, they involve with spending time with friends. I also love my hobbies because I can enjoy them with my family by having fun! But the most thing I love is family time.  

So there you go, and I should thank my friend Jasmine for reading my writing. Here is the link to her blog and I hope you enjoyed my writing.

My Hobbies

Kia Ora World Wide Visitors! I’m going to write about MY HOBBIES! If you're guessing what my hobbies are just hang on to your horses and read. Here is a clue they start with S and R? What Can they be?

What are hobbies? Hmm (LIGHT BULB)They are different types of things that you enjoy like swimming and rippa rugby. So if you want to know what hobbies are, well here you go people this is what Hobbies are!!

Have you guess what my hobbies are yet? Well let me tell you, my first one is swimming?Did you see my clues from paragraph 2 and this paragraph. Well I put my hobbies in the paragraph on top of this one to give you more clues and that’s how I sometimes roll in my writing.  

What I love about my hobbies is that they involve with moving your body and involves with being under water. I love things that involve running and getting under water. I enjoy swimming cause since I was a little girl I was like swimming for freedom in the pool! I love rippa rugby because I think it’s time for one of the grandkids to play a different type of sport rather than basketball!!!

So there you go, and I should thank my friend Jasmine for reading my writing. Here is the link to her blog and I hope you enjoyed my writing.