Marshmallows

A sound of screaming wind a slithery monster creped up to me. I was watching my marshmallow cooking on the fire. Suddenly I heard something behind me! Shocked was shown on my face I was petrified of what I saw. A growl came from the monster but he wasn’t there for me he was actually there for the marshmallow. Sharp teeth came from a smile, grup it took the marshmallow off my hand I was still worried I was going to be eaten. I screamed as the birds flew away.
The monster was scared of me of how the way I screamed. So I took more marshmallows out  of my bag and started to give the monster more. The last one is the marshmallow I wanted but the monster snatched it out of my hand.

I was worried that I might get eaten! Anger it showed trying to chase me down. I had an idea in my head that a pillow looks like a marshmallow. So I chucked my pillow away from me and quickly ran away. The monster didn’t really care. He got the pillow, attached it to the stick trying to cook it, but suddenly a distance of flame burned it to pieces. A sad crying face, it was sad.

Here's a class Link where I found the movie that I wrote about.

Netbook reflection

Having a netbook is awesome! It’s awesome because it makes learning much easier. I love it like my own toy.

What I like about my netbook is that we can just type and publish instead of write, copy and publish, it just takes too long. I love how we have our own netbooks because we don’t have to wait and wait for the multimedia to be free. And it helps me with my learning and I rather have netbooks. Like Math Whizz, math whizz is a good example because it is my favourite subject in the world. So instead of writing the equation and answering it you can just answer it online.

What I dislike of the netbook is that it irritates me when there is no wi-fi. It takes to slow when I have to wait to load the wi-fi, then I have to reload my netbook.

So this is my reflection of my netbook!

My Revamp of christmas

Malo lava this is my narrative about Christmas. The situation is that they try find their missing christmas star.

Tessa, Jeff, Ralonda and Max. They all live in the same house. It was was christmas. Ralonda and Tessa started making the stockings as the boys Max and Jeff were getting the decorations done.

“Mmm what’s that smell” as Ralonda followed the smell.

“It’s my new recipe called Roast chicken” Tessa replied.

As Max was looking through the decorations he had a feeling that something was missing. He looked at the tree he looked closer and notice that there was no star. He was so shocked that he was panicking. He told everyone else and they were figuring how they’re going to find it.

Panicking is everywhere in the house in the rooms in the kitchen where is this star. Looking under and over things has been done repeatedly again and again. As Jeff walked into the lounge he saw  something sparkly under the tree. He wonder what it was.

“Found it” yelled Jeff.

“Where was it? said Max

“it was under the tree.”

TING! came from the oven. Ralonda pulled out the chicken as they all grabbed their plates and started to dig in.

“I LOVE CHRISTMAS” said Max. As they put the star back on the christmas tree. So they all spent their christmas happily!!!

Christmas!!!

Kia ora this is my narrative about Christmas.

Tessa, Jeff, Ralonda and Max. They all live in the same house. It was Christmas. So Ralonda and Tessa started making the stockings as the boys Max and Jeff were getting the decorations done.

“Mmm what’s that smell said Ralonda”

“It’s my new recipe called Roast chicken” said Tessa.

As Max was looking through the decorations he had a feeling that something was missing. So he looked at the tree he looked closer and notice that there was no star. He was so shocked that he was panicking. He told everyone else and they were figuring how they’re going to find one.

They all went to there rooms and had a look around for the star. Through books they looked under beds there were having a headache in the heads. Come on we need that star.

“Found it” yelled Jeff.

“Where was it? said Tessa it was under the tree.

TING! came from the oven. Ralonda pulled out the chicken as they all grabbed their plates and started to dig in.

“I LOVE CHRISTMAS” said Max. As they put the star on the christmas tree.

Different Birthstones!

Birthstones. Different Birthstones with different meanings I wonder what my reason of my stone will be? There is over 50 stones in the world. 

My stone is sapphire the story behind that is that Blue is the color of the element of Water. It symbolizes the ocean, sleep, the sky, and twilight! peaceful, refreshing and calming and also harmony. I love my stone because it’s my favourite colour and I love how it’s designed. So click on link to take you to see your own birthstone and see what is the story about it.

So that’s all viewers I hope you enjoy my writing about different birthstones here is all the Birthstones I can list: Garnet, Amethyst, Aquamarine, Bloodstone, Diamond, Emerald, Pearl, Moonstone, Alexandrite, Ruby, Peridot, Sardonyx, Sapphire, Opal, pink, Tourmaline, Citrine, Yellow, Topaz, Blue Topaz, and Turquoise. I hope you've enjoyed my writing. Ka kite ano.    

Birthstones

A Birthstone is a gemstone that represents the month of your birthday. It has different colours with different meanings. Just click on this link and find your colour of your birthday and on the sidebar there’s a story behind it!

Birthstones are really cool to check out and my one is Sapphire. Sapphire is the colour blue. Here is one of the pictures that has different birthstones that you might be interested in! These are the birthstones that might lead to your month. My favourite one is Aquamarine because it’s my favourite colour blue and I love the way how it’s designed.

So stay tuned Because my next post will be about different birthstones. I hope you had a great time wondering what birthstones are all about! it’s a stone that represents your month. Ka kite ano!

HALLOWEEN!!!

On one spooky Halloween night were 4 kids, named Jason,Kent, Rita and Tanisha. Jason dressed up as Dracula and Kent was a ghost,Rita was Mavis the girl vampire and Tanisha was a angle.

Off they went to the first house. When they knocked, a kind lady gave them a hand full of candy each. Up the stairs of the next house Rita knocked on the door.A squeaky noise came at the back of them... “AHHH!!!” came from Kent in a girly way. 

“Boo”! Shouted the older kids as they snatched the bags of lollies.Jason was angry, frustrated and annoyed. They didn’t know what to do! Rita was smart, she wanted to get her candy back but how?
As they were planning to get there candy back they thought of the greatest plan ever! There plan was the oldest trick, the trip over string trap. 

So they quickly ran back to Kent’s house. They grabbed the string and they grabbed the duct tape. “But how will we find them?” said Tanisha. While they looked out the window,  surprise, surprise they saw the guys that stole their candy.Setting up the trap at Kents house they were ready. Luckily the older guys didn't know it was kents house.BANG!!! came from outside kents house so screaming wildly came out Kent, Rita, Tanisha and Jason."Hahaha who laughing now" said Jason. So they quickly went back inside!

Tipping out of the bags were their candy mmmm said Jason. So they changed back to normal sat in the living room and ate there chocolate happily!!!

Bring it on Term 4

Kia orana this is all about BRING IT ON TERM 4. Through my writing I’ll hope you enjoy it.

What I’m going to write about is how am I going to achieve my goals through term 4. I hope that term 4 has the guts to have my last chance on being a good student of finishing it off properly.

What I love about term 4 is that we are learning and going to build different toys throughout the term. I also love it because I really miss my friends but only for two weeks.The holidays were good but not good enough about school. If you think schools are boring well I’ll say pull yourself together and get to school. School is a good place to learn as you can get a better job.

How I’m going to achieve my goals. Well This is how. I am going to focus as I am and try not get put off work. And if I’ve got spare time to do the rest of my work. So that’s what I’m going to do for my achievement.

So bring it on term 4 cause here is a girl that wont back down.Let’s see what you got.

Ka kite ano I hope you enjoyed my writing of how to achieve my learning through the term. A huge thanks to my best friend jasmine for reading my writing and giving me notice when somethings not right in my writing.

My thought's on the up-coming term

Talofa this will be about my thoughts about this term.This term is term four. I hope you enjoy my writing.

The term is all about Toy Story. Which actually means about toys. Through this term I hope we will discover all of the old toys that we haven't seen in our lives.What I hope the most is that we can make different toys through different objects that we hardly use like rubbish!!!The meaning of the theme is WHAT IS THE STORY BEHIND THE TOY.

My thought’s about this term is that I’m glad it’s about toys. I’m glad it’s about toy’s because it’s much easier to think about and you think quickly what to say in your writing. In my head the thought I’m thinking is this going to be a challenge through my writing?   

Now ladies and gentlemen boys and girls I thank my friend Jasmine for reading my writing and editing it. I also want you to stay tune and have a look at my writing over the terms. Ka kite ano!

My Revamp in my writing!

My family member that has been inspiring me is my brother!He is the only cheerleader I got in my family.

I choose him as my inspiration because he is my role model and my cheerleader.Through the past years I’ve been working hard to be a true rippa rugby star. As I have been training my brother would be cheering me on to be a better player.

What I want in the future for my brother is that I hope he becomes a rugby coach star. But on his side of the story he wants to be police officer and I’ll accept it. But in the future I hope I don’t get arrested by him!

So a big thank you to my friend Jasmine for editing my writing.So stay put because I will be posting about different things that you must be interested in.Tofa soifua!!!

Who's My Inspiration in my life?

The person that inspiration me in my life is my older brother! He is the only friend I got in my family.

I choose him as my inspiration because he is my role model and my cheerleader. He is the one that I love and the one that I treat respectfully. Through the past years I’ve been working hard to be a true rippa rugby star. As I have been training my brother has been watching and has been cheering for me.

What I like about my brother as my inspiration is that I hope he becomes a rugby sort of sports coach. But on his side of it he wants to be police officer and I’ll accept it. But in the future I hope I don’t get arrested by him!

What I think my future is going to turn out is that I hope I’ll be a famous rippa rugby player. So a big thank you to my friend Jasmine for editing and for making it better.

My Improvement in my writing!

Hello! This is all about my book called EJ12. You might of heard of this book. Well this is my thought’s about the book.

I selected this book because
I haven't and I mean haven’t read  one of these series in my whole life. So we’re going to see what was my interested in this author's


What I have seen in this author’s book. Is that I love how she uses her vocabulary like an easy word to a complex interesting word. You might be confused how I explained it but this is what I mean... is that she put the word in a easy meaning into a difficult meaning.Like interest and enthusiastic.

I should really give a big thank you to Jasmine who is also my friend as she has helped me with my writing. So stay tune because there is more to post from me tofa soifua.

My Duffy Book

 Talofa Lava! This is all about my book called EJ12. You might of heard or already read it. Well this is my thought’s about the book.

I choose this book because I love reading and it’s also because reading is my favourite thing to do through my education. Also because I really want to know more of this authors books and see what’s my interest in her writing.

I see in this author is that I love her vocabulary and how she get's easy words that she had transform into an interesting word. Susannah Mcfarlane is a interesting author, but for my opinion and scores on her books is ten and excellent!

I thank my very best friend Jasmine for helping me through my writing by making it make sense.So stay tune and keep in touch because there is another book that I’m going to write about and this one is interesting too and I hope you will enjoy my writing ka kete ano.

My Improvement in my writing!

Kia ora mate I will be telling you all about my hobbies. The first thing we should do is buckle your seat belts because this is writing is going to blow you out of your seats.

What are hobbies? Hobbies are things that you enjoy in your life. Like mine. Mine are Swimming and sports, the main things I enjoy in my life! I chose swimming and sports because my favourite challenge is running. Running? you might be thinking, well swimming does involve running following by sport!

What I love about my hobbies are, they involve with spending time with friends. I also love my hobbies because I can enjoy them with my family by having fun! But the most thing I love is family time.  

So there you go, and I should thank my friend Jasmine for reading my writing. Here is the link to her blog and I hope you enjoyed my writing.

My Hobbies

Kia Ora World Wide Visitors! I’m going to write about MY HOBBIES! If you're guessing what my hobbies are just hang on to your horses and read. Here is a clue they start with S and R? What Can they be?

What are hobbies? Hmm (LIGHT BULB)They are different types of things that you enjoy like swimming and rippa rugby. So if you want to know what hobbies are, well here you go people this is what Hobbies are!!

Have you guess what my hobbies are yet? Well let me tell you, my first one is swimming?Did you see my clues from paragraph 2 and this paragraph. Well I put my hobbies in the paragraph on top of this one to give you more clues and that’s how I sometimes roll in my writing.  

What I love about my hobbies is that they involve with moving your body and involves with being under water. I love things that involve running and getting under water. I enjoy swimming cause since I was a little girl I was like swimming for freedom in the pool! I love rippa rugby because I think it’s time for one of the grandkids to play a different type of sport rather than basketball!!!

So there you go, and I should thank my friend Jasmine for reading my writing. Here is the link to her blog and I hope you enjoyed my writing.

My Learning Goals (Revamp)

Hi visitors this is my revamp of My Learning Goals! Ok, now let’s hit the writing. Hope you enjoy!!!

HHmm my learning starts with the capital R and ends with a lowercase g? What Could my learning be? Well if you guess reading (ding ding) you just used your brain! Well I chose reading because I struggle and also suck at it for the truth... I also chose it because it’s my favourite learning task in school.

My Favourite thing about reading is the books. Why books? You're wondering, well I chose books because it builds my mind up to excellent. So I am going to achieve my goal reading. But there’s one thing. How am I going to achieve it??? Well I suggest that I should think?

What can make my learning goal easier? (Tick) I got it! I think that I should shut my mouth.Shut your mouth? you might be thinking well for the truth I’m a chatter box! Chatter box! Yes yes, I’m a chatter box, A chatterbox is when someone talks too much and I mean too much.So this is what I’m going to do!!! Every time I’m next to my friend and they talk to me IGNORE, if they are again IGNORE or again sit somewhere else. So everyone this is how I'm going to achieve My Learning Goals!!!

So I am thanking my best friend Jasmine for reading my writing! Yes, yes you might of mention her name in my other writing, so here’s  a link to her blog if you might want to know about her. So stay tune as I post more writing about what my different learning goals I’m doing every week.

My Learning Goals!!!

Hello bloggers I’m going to tell you how I’m going to my learning goals! But first you will have to know what are my goals?

HHmm my goals start with R and ends with g? What can it be? Well if you guess reading (Ding Ding Ding) you just won your own mind!! Reading is my goal because it’s the only thing that I struggle on. So let’s hit through the story.

I chose reading cause I find it confusing and with difficulty. I also chose it because I struggle with it too!!! So as I chose that I am practicing to get better at reading. I love reading because it helps me with my education and with my work. I also like it because reading is just my thing. So my learning goal is Reading and I hope I achieve it to.

What can make my learning goal easier? So this is what I’m going to do!!! Well I think I just have to shut my mouth. Shut your mouth? you might be thinking well for the truth I’m a chatter box! Chatter box! Yes yes, I’m a chatter box, A chatterbox is when someone talks too much and I mean too much.So this is what I’m going to do!!!



So all of the bloggers that are reading this now, well here it is my learning goals. And how I’m going to make my work easier. So thank you my friend Jasmine for reading my work. Here is a link to her blog and I hope you enjoy my writing.

A Touring Birthday!!! Version 2

Kia ora and talofa this is all about the.........A Touring Birthday! If you're guessing it’s my birthday you are absolutely wrong? It’s actually my friend Jasmine. She is my best friend by sticking up for me, She’s always beside me when I’m sad.

Oh? Hello I didn’t even notice you there. Welcome to the touring birthday! So we are going to rewind back to the past on saturday, 18 August 2012 9am. Now this birthday is my friend, Her name is Jasmine. Yes, yes you might know her from me mentioning her in my writing!Here is a link to her blog so you can know who she is!!!

At the movies we watched Step Up 4 it was so amazing, dancing in Miami!!! Following by Ten Pin Bowling as the birthday girl one her game. Also coming was Laser strike I won by most points my score 3180.Then we straight away ran to the arcade just on one game getting loads of tickets. After, we went and had this delicious food called Burger King.


The five interesting places that we enjoyed were Movies, Ten Pin Bowling, the Arcade, Laser strike and the tastiest food place in the whole world is...........Burger king.

What I love about the birthday is that we had fun and we all were happy. My most favourite thing was laser strike our opponents were these little kids they were hard to get. One there the other behind me where are these kids? So stay in touch cause I might going to be posting more interesting things about different happenings.

A Touring Birthday

Hello bloggers! I’m going to tell you about this touring birthday. All to know is that this isn’t my birthday?

Oh? Hello welcome to the touring birthday! So we are going to rewind back to the past on saturday, 18 August 2012 9am. Now this birthday is my friend, Her name is Jasmine. Yes, yes you might know her from me mentioning or by her editing and she’s been in my writing too! Here is a link to her blog so you can know who she is!!!

The five places that we enjoyed were Movies, Ten Pin Bowling, the Arcade, Lazer strike and the tastiest place of all, Burger king.

At the movies we watched Step Up 4 it was so amazing dancing in Miami!!! Following by Ten Pin Bowling as the birthday girl won her game. Also coming was Laser strike I won by most points my score 3180.Then we straight away ran to the arcade just on one game getting hundreds of tickets. After, we went and had this delicious food called Burger King.

What I love about the birthday is that we had fun and we all were happy. My most favourite thing was laser strike our opponents were these little kids they were hard to get. One there the other behind me where are these kids?

My Improvement in my writing

Kia orana blog viewers. This, my writing is all about my personal challenge? If you want to know what my personal challenge is you will have to read and look and guess my clues!

OK, my challenge start of with R and ends with N can you guess?
My second is using your legs. Lucky last you run out of breath. So if you suggest rowing your wrong cause (Drum roll please).........RUNNING! Yes running is my personal challenge!

I chose running because in our class we could pick one challenge for the rest of the term. I also chose it because that’s the only thing that I do every day but now I’m going hard core! Running, running is a thing that I really need to go faster on cause cross country is the thing that I want to get better on! Cross country what is that you might be wondering? Well it’s like a race around our school bounds and whoever comes in the top three go’s and challenges different school.

Loving to run is my thing. You can even try. I love running because it makes me fast, healthy and even enjoyable. Running running RUNNING!!! Just stuck in my head can’t get it out of my brain!!

What a round of a pause to jasmine my friend who actually read and helped me with my writing by making it better. So stay tune because I might be post some more about challenges.

My Personal Challenge

Talofa everyone this is my writing about my personal challenge! If you want to know what my personal challenge is... I suggest that you should read and get some clues off my writing to guess?

My Challenge starts with the letter R and ends with G? My second clue is you use your legs? And lucky last you run out of breath? If you guess rowing you are wrong it’s actually running.My experiance in runnung is very struggleling because sometimes when you run you run out of breath and your legs struggle well that’s what I have.

I chose running because: It’s good working out, you have a lot of fun and I can even try beat the world record.But the real reason is because this friday 17 of August, 2012 is cross country.Cross country is running and doing your best. It is also like a race but different teams,years and ages. Running is also my favourite thing during the day!!! And its always good for me to play games on the fields.

What I love about running is that it makes me healthy and fast. When I first started to love running it happened when I was only 10 years old year 6 room 18, last year. It was like a happy sunny day, I was waiting in line full of ten year old girls. Then we were at the start of the line where Mr.Burt was standing with these two wooden pieces in his arms. It was quiet, everyone was nervous........BANG!!! the two woods made together I ran as fast as I could until I ran out of breath nearly half way but still couldn't run. On the way Back to the finish line I got the hang of it, its actually easy!! So the next day I told myself I’m going to achieve my challenge which was running everyday.

I am thanking my friendly friend Jasmine for reading my writing and editing my work to make it better. So Next time if you see me blogging it might be a slightly different and more intelligent. So Tofa Soifua.

The Opening Ceremony

Kia ora everyone did you watch the opening ceremony for the olympic flames? Well all to know I did it was so spectacular. So let see what happened through the ceremony!!!

The thing that made me laugh until the last minute was Mr.bean. He made laugh because the musicians were playing their song and as you here threw the music is a one beat solo of Mr.Bean playing the piano... During his note he needed to sneeze. So he tried to get his bag but he failed but suddenly he had an idea? it was an umbrella so he quickly grabbed it and put it on the piano but he’s still playing the note and grabbed a tissue... when he was finished he had a dream! In his dream he thought that he was in the olympics, but the funniest thing that he always does is cheat!!! he cheated because he was losing so he had a plan to get a car.So that’s what made me laugh until the very last minute.

I have one question for you what is your favourite sports and what did you like about the opening!

My favourite sport is swimming and archery...My thought of the opening is so amazing and so interesting play. My favourite bit was when all the Mary Poppins came and took their kids in their bed. My other lucky last is when Voldemort came for story time for the little girls nightmare. So as I said before why can’t you tell me your favorite clip of the ceremony!!SO LET THE GAMES BEGINS!!!

How Jesse Owens became world wide

Good Morning or good afternoon to you all blog viewers as you know that I’m going to tell you all about how and when did Jesse Owens became the fastest man in the world. So kick back and feel free to wander through my blog!

Jesse Owens attempted in the Olympics of the century of 1936 in Berlin.He won four gold medals in his sprints. The 100m, the 200m and the long jump – and favourite for gold. After he wins his sports loads of autographs will appear in the crowd when he runs down the race track. When he did his long jumps the photograph people took their snapes and after he jumped a huge crowd of interviewers were asking him questions, he was happy to look forward to be interviewed.

As he became world wide he’s been practicing his sprints just to only beat his own world record did you know that? I heard that he was the fastest man in the world and I decided to write about him. One day I thought to myself, I should try beat his world record! I ended up lying on the concrete half way to Glen Innes dehydrated.

So, I wonder what kind of man brown or white whom going to be the new fastest man in the world!!! So there it is my viewers let see who will be the next fastest man? Do you know?

Term 3 Writing, Olympics

Hi there, as you know this is my writing. This writing is all about  the London Olympics.

Do you know what’s my favorite sport is in the olympics? If you guess swimming you are correct. “Why did you choose swimming Tui “you may ask? Well, truthfully  swimming is my thing!!!

The reason why I said swimming is my thing.Well, simply I love swimming! Concentration, speed and movements are the three most important words to me. When I’m at the pools I see how people swim. My big brother thinks I’m weird, But that helps me with my techniques and movements.

What I hope for the future is that when I grow up I’ll compete in the Olympics swimming relays... Or I hope I’ll beat the world swimming world record .  

So that’s all, my blog viewers if you enjoyed my blog feel free to comment.Thanks to jasmine for reading and editing my work. Are you a good swimmer, do you have a goal?

Why I love reading

Hello there ! I’m going to tell you a bit of my writing about what I love  about reading. So kick back and relax and read...

Reading, reading is my thing but not actually my thing but it is my favourite task that I like to do through my learning. Why do you like reading you may ask well I like reading because I love adventures and action to read, If I saw a movie that had a lot of action I will be desperate to get the book of that movie thats why I love READING! My second thing that I love reading is that it builds up my knowledge of reading so I can read and post.

You know people think that reading task are hard for them but believe me it is! I think it’s hard because I chose it to be. I chose it to be difficult because I love achieving them. Achieving them is such like me because it feels fantastic. But when you were young how did you feel when you achieve your reading task?

Now, this shows how much I really love reading. This picture is my reward that means I’ve got 100% on my work. So stay tuned because this piece is actually not finnish and next time I will post the rest.

Why is this my Favourite place?

This is my Favourite place because beaches is just my thing. I like beaches because: there is a lot of space to play games, we can go swimming and my favourite thing to do is relaxing! Relaxing is y thing because every day after school I don’t get that much sleep.

What I do at my favourite place is that sometimes my brother and I play tag and I am a pretty good runner and hider for my older brother. After I play tag with my brother I actually have a rest and really big amount of drink cause I run a lot... Later during the day at the beach my day will always sneak up to me with a bucket full of water and SPLASH!!! soaking wet “oh no not again” I said!

What I like about my favourite place is that I love family celebration going on at the beach. The other is, actually that only it...

Next time I’m going to the beach the first thing I’m going to do is wait for my dad go to sleep and water bomb him. The second is just kick back and enjoy the day.

True Best Friends

Who are these mysterious girls in the picture above?

I know who those girls are my best friends and their names
are Tui and Jasmine
and the girl in the middle is me
Ngametua.

I would like to tell you a bit about  myself and my friends.  My friends are cool to me and they are always kind, but sometimes I could be a pain in their heads but

they don’t care, and when someone tries to hurt me they always stick up for
me and that’s what you call TRUE FRIENDS.

True friends are treasures to me and I like having friends right beside me, when

I am lonely they always stay with me and we will play games like up and down tiggy, man hunt, rugby, kicking, throws, touch and other cool games.

My friends and I like being TRUE FRIENDS and true mates.True friends are good to play with. True mates are loving and trusting.

I love my Best Friends!!!

This was edited from: Ngametua and Tui S

Talking about sign language!

Do you know what this is? Well let me tell you what this picture is! This is a chart that tells you how to do these letters in sign language. The start of last week ,30th of April to 6 of May was actually sign language week. Did you know it was sign language week? Well let’s get back to the story. Sign language week was to represent the kids and adults that has to use sign language to speak, thats why all the schools in aotearoa has to sing and do sign language at the same time the National anthem.

Sign Language, sign language can be hard for people to understand but we can still try our best to understanding. So, this is my writing about sign language. Click on this http://player.vimeo.com/video/41226419 and our school will show you how to sing the national anthem in sign language.