My Revamp in my writing!

My family member that has been inspiring me is my brother!He is the only cheerleader I got in my family.

I choose him as my inspiration because he is my role model and my cheerleader.Through the past years I’ve been working hard to be a true rippa rugby star. As I have been training my brother would be cheering me on to be a better player.

What I want in the future for my brother is that I hope he becomes a rugby coach star. But on his side of the story he wants to be police officer and I’ll accept it. But in the future I hope I don’t get arrested by him!

So a big thank you to my friend Jasmine for editing my writing.So stay put because I will be posting about different things that you must be interested in.Tofa soifua!!!

Who's My Inspiration in my life?

The person that inspiration me in my life is my older brother! He is the only friend I got in my family.

I choose him as my inspiration because he is my role model and my cheerleader. He is the one that I love and the one that I treat respectfully. Through the past years I’ve been working hard to be a true rippa rugby star. As I have been training my brother has been watching and has been cheering for me.

What I like about my brother as my inspiration is that I hope he becomes a rugby sort of sports coach. But on his side of it he wants to be police officer and I’ll accept it. But in the future I hope I don’t get arrested by him!

What I think my future is going to turn out is that I hope I’ll be a famous rippa rugby player. So a big thank you to my friend Jasmine for editing and for making it better.

My Improvement in my writing!

Hello! This is all about my book called EJ12. You might of heard of this book. Well this is my thought’s about the book.

I selected this book because
I haven't and I mean haven’t read  one of these series in my whole life. So we’re going to see what was my interested in this author's


What I have seen in this author’s book. Is that I love how she uses her vocabulary like an easy word to a complex interesting word. You might be confused how I explained it but this is what I mean... is that she put the word in a easy meaning into a difficult meaning.Like interest and enthusiastic.

I should really give a big thank you to Jasmine who is also my friend as she has helped me with my writing. So stay tune because there is more to post from me tofa soifua.

My Duffy Book

 Talofa Lava! This is all about my book called EJ12. You might of heard or already read it. Well this is my thought’s about the book.

I choose this book because I love reading and it’s also because reading is my favourite thing to do through my education. Also because I really want to know more of this authors books and see what’s my interest in her writing.

I see in this author is that I love her vocabulary and how she get's easy words that she had transform into an interesting word. Susannah Mcfarlane is a interesting author, but for my opinion and scores on her books is ten and excellent!

I thank my very best friend Jasmine for helping me through my writing by making it make sense.So stay tune and keep in touch because there is another book that I’m going to write about and this one is interesting too and I hope you will enjoy my writing ka kete ano.

My Improvement in my writing!

Kia ora mate I will be telling you all about my hobbies. The first thing we should do is buckle your seat belts because this is writing is going to blow you out of your seats.

What are hobbies? Hobbies are things that you enjoy in your life. Like mine. Mine are Swimming and sports, the main things I enjoy in my life! I chose swimming and sports because my favourite challenge is running. Running? you might be thinking, well swimming does involve running following by sport!

What I love about my hobbies are, they involve with spending time with friends. I also love my hobbies because I can enjoy them with my family by having fun! But the most thing I love is family time.  

So there you go, and I should thank my friend Jasmine for reading my writing. Here is the link to her blog and I hope you enjoyed my writing.

My Hobbies

Kia Ora World Wide Visitors! I’m going to write about MY HOBBIES! If you're guessing what my hobbies are just hang on to your horses and read. Here is a clue they start with S and R? What Can they be?

What are hobbies? Hmm (LIGHT BULB)They are different types of things that you enjoy like swimming and rippa rugby. So if you want to know what hobbies are, well here you go people this is what Hobbies are!!

Have you guess what my hobbies are yet? Well let me tell you, my first one is swimming?Did you see my clues from paragraph 2 and this paragraph. Well I put my hobbies in the paragraph on top of this one to give you more clues and that’s how I sometimes roll in my writing.  

What I love about my hobbies is that they involve with moving your body and involves with being under water. I love things that involve running and getting under water. I enjoy swimming cause since I was a little girl I was like swimming for freedom in the pool! I love rippa rugby because I think it’s time for one of the grandkids to play a different type of sport rather than basketball!!!

So there you go, and I should thank my friend Jasmine for reading my writing. Here is the link to her blog and I hope you enjoyed my writing.

My Learning Goals (Revamp)

Hi visitors this is my revamp of My Learning Goals! Ok, now let’s hit the writing. Hope you enjoy!!!

HHmm my learning starts with the capital R and ends with a lowercase g? What Could my learning be? Well if you guess reading (ding ding) you just used your brain! Well I chose reading because I struggle and also suck at it for the truth... I also chose it because it’s my favourite learning task in school.

My Favourite thing about reading is the books. Why books? You're wondering, well I chose books because it builds my mind up to excellent. So I am going to achieve my goal reading. But there’s one thing. How am I going to achieve it??? Well I suggest that I should think?

What can make my learning goal easier? (Tick) I got it! I think that I should shut my mouth.Shut your mouth? you might be thinking well for the truth I’m a chatter box! Chatter box! Yes yes, I’m a chatter box, A chatterbox is when someone talks too much and I mean too much.So this is what I’m going to do!!! Every time I’m next to my friend and they talk to me IGNORE, if they are again IGNORE or again sit somewhere else. So everyone this is how I'm going to achieve My Learning Goals!!!

So I am thanking my best friend Jasmine for reading my writing! Yes, yes you might of mention her name in my other writing, so here’s  a link to her blog if you might want to know about her. So stay tune as I post more writing about what my different learning goals I’m doing every week.

My Learning Goals!!!

Hello bloggers I’m going to tell you how I’m going to my learning goals! But first you will have to know what are my goals?

HHmm my goals start with R and ends with g? What can it be? Well if you guess reading (Ding Ding Ding) you just won your own mind!! Reading is my goal because it’s the only thing that I struggle on. So let’s hit through the story.

I chose reading cause I find it confusing and with difficulty. I also chose it because I struggle with it too!!! So as I chose that I am practicing to get better at reading. I love reading because it helps me with my education and with my work. I also like it because reading is just my thing. So my learning goal is Reading and I hope I achieve it to.

What can make my learning goal easier? So this is what I’m going to do!!! Well I think I just have to shut my mouth. Shut your mouth? you might be thinking well for the truth I’m a chatter box! Chatter box! Yes yes, I’m a chatter box, A chatterbox is when someone talks too much and I mean too much.So this is what I’m going to do!!!



So all of the bloggers that are reading this now, well here it is my learning goals. And how I’m going to make my work easier. So thank you my friend Jasmine for reading my work. Here is a link to her blog and I hope you enjoy my writing.