A Touring Birthday!!! Version 2

Kia ora and talofa this is all about the.........A Touring Birthday! If you're guessing it’s my birthday you are absolutely wrong? It’s actually my friend Jasmine. She is my best friend by sticking up for me, She’s always beside me when I’m sad.

Oh? Hello I didn’t even notice you there. Welcome to the touring birthday! So we are going to rewind back to the past on saturday, 18 August 2012 9am. Now this birthday is my friend, Her name is Jasmine. Yes, yes you might know her from me mentioning her in my writing!Here is a link to her blog so you can know who she is!!!

At the movies we watched Step Up 4 it was so amazing, dancing in Miami!!! Following by Ten Pin Bowling as the birthday girl one her game. Also coming was Laser strike I won by most points my score 3180.Then we straight away ran to the arcade just on one game getting loads of tickets. After, we went and had this delicious food called Burger King.


The five interesting places that we enjoyed were Movies, Ten Pin Bowling, the Arcade, Laser strike and the tastiest food place in the whole world is...........Burger king.

What I love about the birthday is that we had fun and we all were happy. My most favourite thing was laser strike our opponents were these little kids they were hard to get. One there the other behind me where are these kids? So stay in touch cause I might going to be posting more interesting things about different happenings.

A Touring Birthday

Hello bloggers! I’m going to tell you about this touring birthday. All to know is that this isn’t my birthday?

Oh? Hello welcome to the touring birthday! So we are going to rewind back to the past on saturday, 18 August 2012 9am. Now this birthday is my friend, Her name is Jasmine. Yes, yes you might know her from me mentioning or by her editing and she’s been in my writing too! Here is a link to her blog so you can know who she is!!!

The five places that we enjoyed were Movies, Ten Pin Bowling, the Arcade, Lazer strike and the tastiest place of all, Burger king.

At the movies we watched Step Up 4 it was so amazing dancing in Miami!!! Following by Ten Pin Bowling as the birthday girl won her game. Also coming was Laser strike I won by most points my score 3180.Then we straight away ran to the arcade just on one game getting hundreds of tickets. After, we went and had this delicious food called Burger King.

What I love about the birthday is that we had fun and we all were happy. My most favourite thing was laser strike our opponents were these little kids they were hard to get. One there the other behind me where are these kids?

My Improvement in my writing

Kia orana blog viewers. This, my writing is all about my personal challenge? If you want to know what my personal challenge is you will have to read and look and guess my clues!

OK, my challenge start of with R and ends with N can you guess?
My second is using your legs. Lucky last you run out of breath. So if you suggest rowing your wrong cause (Drum roll please).........RUNNING! Yes running is my personal challenge!

I chose running because in our class we could pick one challenge for the rest of the term. I also chose it because that’s the only thing that I do every day but now I’m going hard core! Running, running is a thing that I really need to go faster on cause cross country is the thing that I want to get better on! Cross country what is that you might be wondering? Well it’s like a race around our school bounds and whoever comes in the top three go’s and challenges different school.

Loving to run is my thing. You can even try. I love running because it makes me fast, healthy and even enjoyable. Running running RUNNING!!! Just stuck in my head can’t get it out of my brain!!

What a round of a pause to jasmine my friend who actually read and helped me with my writing by making it better. So stay tune because I might be post some more about challenges.

My Personal Challenge

Talofa everyone this is my writing about my personal challenge! If you want to know what my personal challenge is... I suggest that you should read and get some clues off my writing to guess?

My Challenge starts with the letter R and ends with G? My second clue is you use your legs? And lucky last you run out of breath? If you guess rowing you are wrong it’s actually running.My experiance in runnung is very struggleling because sometimes when you run you run out of breath and your legs struggle well that’s what I have.

I chose running because: It’s good working out, you have a lot of fun and I can even try beat the world record.But the real reason is because this friday 17 of August, 2012 is cross country.Cross country is running and doing your best. It is also like a race but different teams,years and ages. Running is also my favourite thing during the day!!! And its always good for me to play games on the fields.

What I love about running is that it makes me healthy and fast. When I first started to love running it happened when I was only 10 years old year 6 room 18, last year. It was like a happy sunny day, I was waiting in line full of ten year old girls. Then we were at the start of the line where Mr.Burt was standing with these two wooden pieces in his arms. It was quiet, everyone was nervous........BANG!!! the two woods made together I ran as fast as I could until I ran out of breath nearly half way but still couldn't run. On the way Back to the finish line I got the hang of it, its actually easy!! So the next day I told myself I’m going to achieve my challenge which was running everyday.

I am thanking my friendly friend Jasmine for reading my writing and editing my work to make it better. So Next time if you see me blogging it might be a slightly different and more intelligent. So Tofa Soifua.

The Opening Ceremony

Kia ora everyone did you watch the opening ceremony for the olympic flames? Well all to know I did it was so spectacular. So let see what happened through the ceremony!!!

The thing that made me laugh until the last minute was Mr.bean. He made laugh because the musicians were playing their song and as you here threw the music is a one beat solo of Mr.Bean playing the piano... During his note he needed to sneeze. So he tried to get his bag but he failed but suddenly he had an idea? it was an umbrella so he quickly grabbed it and put it on the piano but he’s still playing the note and grabbed a tissue... when he was finished he had a dream! In his dream he thought that he was in the olympics, but the funniest thing that he always does is cheat!!! he cheated because he was losing so he had a plan to get a car.So that’s what made me laugh until the very last minute.

I have one question for you what is your favourite sports and what did you like about the opening!

My favourite sport is swimming and archery...My thought of the opening is so amazing and so interesting play. My favourite bit was when all the Mary Poppins came and took their kids in their bed. My other lucky last is when Voldemort came for story time for the little girls nightmare. So as I said before why can’t you tell me your favorite clip of the ceremony!!SO LET THE GAMES BEGINS!!!